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Everything,
Is just one big mess.
It hurts and I'm lost again.

I'm back to the beginning.
I've fallen down again.
But not to the bottom;
Not yet.

If I had,
I'm quite sure;
I wouldn't be here right now.

Everything becomes good,
But at the same time not.
If it isn't a heavy feeling,
It's a mean thought.

I know there are people worse off;
So why am I feeling this?
I have and am nothing,
A pathetic girl with…
Unique, silly scars…

This;
Is silly.
But it's true.

But I shouldn't feel this way.
I can't control my feelings, and
I can't control my thoughts.
I want to runaway…
Like I always do.
But I'm stuck;
With no
Answer.
No way
Out.

Of the,
Everything.
That will.
Never.
End…
.
Feedback please............

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LoveHidanForever Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
this describes too well what I'm feeling right now... It's really good and beautiful, I'm crying really much now... I was crying already but now I'm crying more... I don't really know is it good or bad... I think it's good, because I don't feel like going to cut my wrists anymore... Thank you... :heart::heart::heart:
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YellowTori Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww this made me cry :O I'm so glad I made you not feel like cutting. If you ever ever ever need to talk just note me! You're very welcome. :heart:
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LoveHidanForever Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you, again ;w; I watched you so I will find you easily if I need to TwT Hopefully this "period" will end soon, I have had these periods when I'm sad and ready jump down from a high building and then after that I have had a REEEEALLY happy time, and then fell to the rock bottom again. ._. I really wonder what's it all about that I keep going those ups and downs all the time ( '-') You know the feeling, any familiar? 8< And know that you can also come to speak to me anytime :heart::heart::heart:
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YellowTori Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you for the watch =] Yeah I sometimes have the high and low thing as well. And thank you :D
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LoveHidanForever Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
You're welcome :heart: And okay, so I'm not alone. :meow:
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Nessie905 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is how I feel lately... Nice poem :clap:
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YellowTori Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you :)
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Nessie905 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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